Trifecta Challenge – Three Things at the Same Time.

The sunset was beautiful, because it was an artist’s palette. But it was also sad, because he would never watch another sunset with the woman he had loved. So it was terrible too.

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9 thoughts on “Trifecta Challenge – Three Things at the Same Time.

  1. I love how terse and bleak that last line is compared to the poetry and sentimentality of the first two. That contrast is what really makes this piece work, in my opinion. Great job!

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